Analysis of opening scene first draft:
Things to change:
- Make a clear framing shift from medium two shot too medium-close two shot
- Missing false scare
- Use a cat or a dog to open a door
- Camera shake throughout scenes
- Try to use bedroom instead of living room
- Some scenes where characters look directly into camera
- Shorten cuts
- Make Scream Queen more obvious (stereotypical)
- More makeup - Bright lipstick
- Skin tight + Ripped jeans
- Change plain black socks in close up
- Tiffany wearing pink socks
- Make gender roles clearer
- Micheal protects Tiffany much clearer
- Tells her to stay while he goes and checks out a noise
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