Analysis of Rough cut:

Link to rough cut:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VFgIpurdR_s

•Positives:

•Reflect the scream queen idea well

•The man on the TV screen is very well done 

•Attempted to cover the stalking convention

•Attempted false scare

Negatives:

•We dislike the establishing shot and will change it to a more genre specific one.

•We need to experiment with different titles

•Improve false scare

•Stalking needs to be change and fixed

•Add cross cut with final girl in garage 

•We need to shorten some cutes (clothing, going down to garage)

•Maybe include an ellipsis

Things to change in next edit:
•Shorten takes to build tension
•More SFX
•Add lair scenes throughout
•Remove some shots that don't add much


 Re-shoot:
•False scare
•Establishing shots
• More urgency in shots maybe some handheld 
•Film more shot variety of going down stairs
•Add slashing scene